Diary Entry 21

I found out today that I have more time to improve my overall magazine. I have recieved lots of detailed feedback from peers and teachers and have several things I am going to focus my time on. Firstly I am going to improve my overall blog, in order to make sure that I have explained every post in detail and are able to receieve the highest marks I can. After I have done so I will improve certain parts of my magazine. I know that my double page spread is my weakest element of my magazine and due to restrictions on time I couldn't improve it as much as I wanted to therefore I am going to use this time effectively and improve it as much as I can.