Diary Entry 17

I have just finished analysing the comments I recieved from my peers about my final draft. I have completed it in the first lesson which was my aim so I am very pleased. I have taken every comment on board and found each comment very helpful and I am confident that these comments will improve my magazine. I will now focus on applying the improvements to my magazine and also to keep on getting audience feedback throughout the process of improving so that I can keep making it appealing and attractive.